Who is good friend?


       A Good Friend  



  We came to the world as single person but this doesn’t mean that we will live single.  Every person needs a partner in her or his life and the most important partners are our friends. Most people think that partner is only the one who is opposite sex of us. Both this is a common belief which is wrong. Of course our husbands or wifes are the best partner of us but until we find them a good friend is the one which is most needed for us . Therefore; this important person should have some qualifications.
  There are three qualities that I need to see in a good friend.First, a good friend should not tell lies.I need to trust him/her so that I can talk to him/her.Because in my bad days I am in need of sharing my emotions and even my secrets.So the person whom I trust this much should be reliable.Second, a good friend should be there  when I need him/her.I should be able to find him/her near me when I am in a bad mood or when I have problem.Every one has  bad days in their lifes and real friend comes in view in that days.Finally, when necessay, s/he should criticize me so that I can change my undesirable behaviour or see where I am wrong.Theese of course should not be for make me sad.They should be for showing me the truth.I think, theese qualities are the basic properties in a good friend.
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  1. Gulalek Chariyeva17 Ocak 2013 03:31


    Dear Elif:)
    You chose very important topic here to share with us. You mentioned very interesting points here which makes recall the features of the good friend. You started with an interesting entry or let’s say beginning sentence. I strongly agree with your certain points that you discussed. We need to find our real friend/s. Yet, it is difficult because satisfying our each desire may not be possible. Again you first introduced common understanding of good friend. Then, you stated that the good friend requires some quality features like being trustful and being ready when he is needed. Though there are mentioned many pretty good instructions, there are several mistakes in your paragraph as well. Firstly, some several spelling problems you have in the entry like: necessary and Theese. Secondly, there are some problems in forming words in right form like: Both this, husbands or wifes are the best partner. Finally, there have few word choice problems in your paragraph. For instance: we will live single, so that I can talk to him/her ,and Because in my bad days. In addition to all it is more pleasant grammatically no to begin a sentence with because and so.
    Overall, I truly liked your topic and its content. Good job:)))

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